快进来

快进来! 首先寻找水平高的人,长期在线的.+87756821
另外请大师帮我改下下面的句子
中文大意:我听说我被贵公司录取首先感谢您给我这样一个机会,我刚刚毕业而且专业也不符.对相关的业务了解也甚少.但是我还年轻有时间投入到此领域学习,我会尽快的熟悉业务并且把热情,努力带到工作中去,我会努力工作以回报你对我的信任
再次感谢您(如有地方用词欠妥,也可不按上述直接翻译)
Dear XXXX:
I have heared the news that I am in the employ of the XXX company.
Firstly, I am very thank you for giving me a chance to entry the XXXXX company. You know I have just graduared from college and major in the computer. Knowing very little about the operation,but I am young, I have enough time to dive into this field. I will do my best to be familiar with the operation as soon as possible and bring my ardour and effort into work .I will work hard to repay your trust .
thank you once more   

参考案 very thank you ---thank you very much or very thankful
entry---enter
and major in the computer---and I am major in computer
enough time ---enough time and confidence