高分求作文润色

高分求作文润色 Lessons are different here from my country. The time table seems we only have four hours to have classes. There are no all-day-classes like my motherland. In china sixty percent can pass the examinations and over ninety percent is an outstanding score. But here forty percent is passing. It is quite good if you got fifty-five. We have several kinds of classes here, like: tutorial, lecture, presentation, seminaries, ect. And I enjoy every minute of group discuss and tutorial. the assess system is also new to me.i may be assessed in a variety of ways including: individual or group presentations and projects, submission of essays or reports, class tests, open-book course work, not just assess my effort by the final examinations. It is an equity way that I never come through.

I claim the black man speaks quite good English, which makes me feel nervous. A tutor of mine has said, “No one expects you to be perfect. If you are, you will not be here. So do not be shy to make mistake. You just practice your English.” After I heard that, there is a brain storm in my mind. There is no need to worry about my low English level. Even native speakers also have lots of things to learn. Afraid of speaking is useless. Speaking in a foreign language is difficult for me. But many people use it as fluently as native speakers do. “Impossible is nothing”, I can do everything successful.
   

参考案 The schedule here is different from that in my country. The timetable indicates that we only have four hours of classes. There is no all-day-classes(?) like in my motherland. In China, a passing score of an examination is sixty percent and an outstanding score is over ninety percent, but here, forty percent is the passing score, and one is thought to be doing quite well if s/he gets fifty-five percent. We have several kinds of classes here, like lectures, tutorials, presentations, seminars, etc. I enjoy every minute of the group discussions and tutorials. The assessment system is also new to me. I may be assessed in a variety of ways, including individual or group presentations and projects, submission of essays or reports, class tests, open-book course work, and not just the scores I get on final examinations. It is a fair way of assessing one's effort that I've never been through.

I claim that black people speak English quite well (I personally doubt that. Is it English that they speak?), which makes me feel nervous. A tutor of mine said to me: “No one expects you to be perfect. If you are, you will not be here. So do not be shy to make mistakes. Just practice your English.” After I heard that, a storm broke out in my mind (老大,brainstorm是打腹稿). There is no need to worry about my low English level. Even native speakers still have lots of things to learn. Being afraid of speaking English is useless. Speaking a foreign language is difficult for me, but many people speak their second langagues as fluently as native speakers do. “Impossible is nothing”, I'm certain that I can do everything successfully.