翻译5

翻译5 Estimated Occupancy Date: First day of the month following substantial completion of tenant
improvements, estimated at Aug. 1, 2008 or close of escrow, whichever occurring earliest.   

参考案 Business Dictionary:
Tenant Improvements (TIS)
Those changes, typically to office, retail, or industrial property, to accommodate specific needs of a tenant. TIs include installation or relocation of interior walls or partitions, carpeting or other floor covering, shelves, windows, toilets, etc. The cost of these is negotiated in the lease.

escrow
An escrow is a deposit of funds, a deed or other instrument by one party for the delivery to another party upon completion of a specific condition or event. It is an independent neutral account by which the interests of all parties to the transaction are protected.

预计入住日期: 承租装修实质完成后的第一个月的第一天，预计为08年8月1日,或第三方托管结束(交割?)，以两者较早发生的日期为准。

(老兄，你的东西太难译了，不干了，太费时间。)