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高分翻译(特别是括号里的词语)50分 One day, about ten years ago, while working at the cash register in the gift shop at my University Museum of Natural History, I saw （an） elderly couple come in with a little girl in a wheelchair. As I looked （closer/closely） at this girl, I found that she was fixed on her chair. I then realized she had no arms or legs , just a head, a neck and upper body,（ dressed ）in a little white skirt. As the couple wheeled her up to me, I turned my head toward the girl. When I took the money from her grandparents, I looked back （at） the girl, who was giving me the most optimistic, largest smile I had ever seen. All of a sudden, her handicap was gone and all I saw was this beautiful girl,（whose）smile just melted me （and） almost instantly gave me a completely new sense of （what） life is all about. She took me from a poor, unhappy college student and （brought) me into her world; a world of smiles, love and (warmth). I’m a successful business man now and whenever I think about the troubles of the world, I think about that little girl and the remarkable lesson about life that she taught （me）   

参考案 One day, about ten years ago, while working at the cash register in the gift shop at my University Museum of Natural History, I saw （an） elderly couple come in with a little girl in a wheelchair.
大约十年前的一天，那时我在我们大学自然科学博物馆的礼品店作收款员。那天， 我看见一对老夫妇推着一个轮椅，里面坐着一个小姑娘来到我们的店里。


As I looked （closer/closely） at this girl, I found that she was fixed on her chair. I then realized she had no arms or legs , just a head, a neck and upper body,（ dressed ）in a little white skirt.
我仔细地观察了这个女孩子，我发现她的整个身子牢牢地固定在轮椅中，这时我才认识到，她既没有双臂，有没有双腿，只有一个脑袋，一个脖子和身着一条白裙子的上半身。

As the couple wheeled her up to me, I turned my head toward the girl.
当老夫妇推着她来到收款台时，我转过头面对着这个小姑娘。

When I took the money from her grandparents, I looked back （at） the girl, who was giving me the most optimistic, largest smile I had ever seen.
我收了他们的款，同时看了一眼小姑娘，我发现她正朝着我微笑，那微笑是那么的开朗和开心。

All of a sudden, her handicap was gone and all I saw was this beautiful girl,（whose）smile just melted me （and） almost instantly gave me a completely new sense of （what） life is all about.
一瞬间，她的残障一下子不见了，这个美丽的小姑娘的微笑触动了我的心灵使我重新认识到生命的意义。

She took me from a poor, unhappy college student and （brought) me into her world; a world of smiles, love and (warmth).
我曾经是一个一贫如洗，对生活不报希望的大学生，这个小姑娘改变了我，带我走进她充满微笑，慈爱和温暖的世界。

I’m a successful business man now and whenever I think about the troubles of the world, I think about that little girl and the remarkable lesson about life that she taught （me）
如今我是一个事业宏达的买卖人，每当我想起世上的挫折，我就会想起那个小姑娘和她教授我的重要的人生经验。
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