六级写作参考范文(1)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed to write a composition on the topic On Part-time Jobs. You should write at least 150 words and you should base your composition on the outline.?
1.Some people say that college students should take part-time jobs.?
2.Others worry that part-time jobs do them more harm than good.?
3. What is your view on this ? Why or why not ?
写作指导?
本文为议论文。可以分四段写。在第一段中提出自己的观点。第二段列举大学生从事业
余工作的好处，并举出论据；第三段举出论据，论证业余工作的弊端；最后提出自己的建议
。论证方法可采用比较和对比法，业余工作的利与弊的比较对比；还可以用例证法；因果分
析论证法。关联词可以用first, second(表示列举)；besides(表示补充：而且)；however(
表示对比：可是，然而)等。?
Sample Writing?
On Part-time Jobs?
People have different views on whether college students should take part-ti
me jobs. I think part- time jobs have both their advantages and disadvantages.?
First, part-time jobs may offer students an opportunity to display their ability and help them apply their knowledge in practice, and in return, their experience will make them know better what they have learned in class and books. Second, part-time jobs in business can foster a sense of competition, which they need in future. Part-time jobs make students more confident in themselves because through the work they can realize their own value and prove that they are capable
people. Third, it helps students develop a sense of independence, and helps reli
eve their parents’ economic burdens. With the money earned, they can buy whatever they need for their study.?
However, part-time jobs often distract students’ attention from their studies, and some students even play truant. It is evident that they can hardly focus
their attention on their