四级作文经典首段

四级作文经典首段

时间:2011-04-19 大学英语
由于四级考生的数量之多,老师们的批改任务重,浏览单份作文的时间就极其有限。因此文章首段,也就是第一印象很重要。这里,我们一起来看一下海伦·凯勒的作品《假如给我三天光明》,并将其改写成四级作文首段。

I have often thought it would be ablessing if each human being were stricken blind and deaf for afew days at some time during his early adult life.Darkness would make him more appreciative of sight;silence would teach him the joys of sound.(3 days to see)

大意是:我一直认为:如果一个人在人生中的早期有一段时间失明失聪,这将是一件非常美好的事情。黑暗使他更加珍惜视力;寂静使他能够体会到声音的快乐。(请注意虚拟语气的语法现象)

2009年12月真题:

1.建设校园十分重要

2.不仅是绿色环境

3.我们应该怎么办

首段:I have often thought it would be ablessing if each human being were sent to Pandora,a planet in Avatar,for afew days at some time during his early campus life.Primitive forest would make him more appreciative of environment;Navi,the residents there,would teach him the joys of cooperation.

大意是:我一直认为:如果一个人在大学生活初期能有机会去电影阿凡达中的潘多拉星球待上几天,这将是一件非常美好的事情。原始森林使他更加珍惜绿色环境;纳威人教会他合作的乐趣。

2009年6月真题:

Free Admission to museums

越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么?

也会带来一些问题;

你的看法?

首段:I have often thought it would be ablessing if each human being were given free access to Museum forever.Historic relics would make him more familiar with the creature's evolution;Rough and archaic equipments displayed in Museum would teach him the joys of the application of modern science and technology.

大意是:我一直认为:如果每一个人能永远免费去参观博物馆,这将是一件非常好的事情。历史文物将使他熟悉生物进化的历程;古老粗糙的工具设备使他体会到现如今高科技应用的乐趣。

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