【参考范文】
首段：As is clearly depicted from a series of cartoons that a man is excessively dependent on the computer whether in working and playing or at home and sleeping. The impact of the computer on daily life is such seriousness that it is high time we paid attention to it.
【亮点表达】
1. 如图清晰的描述了：As is clearly depicted...
2. 一系列图画：a series of / a set of
3. 过分地依赖于：be excessively dependent on ...
4. 无论...还是....：whether ...or ...
5. 电脑对日常生活产生的影响：the impact of the computer on daily life
6. 如此....以致于...：such... That...
7. 该到了干...的时候了：it is high time ...
展开段：In the first place, due to the wide application of the computer, some people called net friends always take priority over our family and friends in real life. The bulk of each day including our time and energy is spent on the Internet. What’s more, the Internet deprives us of the delight in communication with others. When taking to someone by us, we can hear their voices, see their expressions, and even hold their hands if we would like to. Last but not least, the computer will lead to a decline of our skills of face-to-face communication. Thus we may feel embarrassed and find it harder to communicate with people around us.
【亮点表达】
1. 首先....其次...最后：In the first place/what’s more/last but not least
2. 由于：due to...
3. 优于...胜于...：take priority over...
4. 每天的大部时间：the bulk of each day
5. 剥夺了某人关于....：deprive sb of sth
6. 与他人沟通：communication with...
7. 面对面的沟通：face-to-face communication
8. 感觉到很尴尬：feel embarrassed
结论段：To sum up, we shouldn’t be dependent on the computer excessively. No matter how convenient and speedy it is, we should remember the advantage of face-to-face communication.
【亮点表达】
1. 总结：to sum up
2. 无论多么的方便与快捷：no matter how convenient and speedy
学习任何知识需要日积月累，对于一门英语这门语言来讲更是如此，以上亮点表达希望各位考生朋友能够熟记在心。
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