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雅思英语考试写作部分经典错误与分析

时间:2021-09-06 16:41:00 雅思英语 我要投稿

雅思英语考试写作部分经典错误与分析

  一、不一致(disagreements)

雅思英语考试写作部分经典错误与分析

  所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致,它还包括了数的不一致时态不一致及代词不一致等.

  例1. When one have money, he can do what he want to .

  (人一旦有了钱,他就能想干什么就干什么.)

  剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have应改为has;同理,want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.

  改为:Once one has money,he can do what he wants(to do)

  二、修饰语错位(misplaced modifiers)

  英语与汉语不同,同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置,句子的含义可能引起变化.对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视,因而造成了不必要的误解.例1. I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.

  剖析:better位置不当,应置于句末.

  三、句子不完整(sentence fragments)

  在口语中,交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等,不完整的句子完全可以被理解.可是书面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清,这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后,笔者又想加些补充说明时发生.

  例1. There are many ways to know the society. For example by tv, radio, newspaper and so on .

  剖析:本句后半部分"for example by tv, radio, newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句.

  改为:There are many ways to know society, for example, by tv, radio, and newspaper.

  四、悬垂修饰语(dangling modifiers)

  所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清.例如:At the age of ten, my grandfather died.这句中"at the age of ten"只点出十岁时,但没有说明“谁”十岁时.按一般推理不可能是my grandfather,如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点,全句就不那么费解了.

  改为:

  When I was ten, my grandfather died.

  例1. To do well in college, good grades are essential.

  剖析:句中不定式短语“to do well in college”的逻辑主语不清楚.

  改为:

  To do well in college, a student needs good grades.

  五、词性误用(misuse of parts of speech)

  “词性误用”常表现为:介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等.

  例1. None can negative the importance of money.

  剖析:negative系形容词,误作动词。

  改为:

  None can deny the importance of money.

  六、指代不清(ambiguous reference of pronouns)

  指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清,或者先后所用的代词不一致。试看下面这一句:

  Mary was friendly