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高考英语题型写作:结构严密行文连贯

时间:2022-02-06 10:58:51 中学英语 我要投稿

高考英语题型写作:结构严密行文连贯

有关写作,我们首先看一看2000年和2001年高考中的两篇满分作文。

高考英语题型写作:结构严密行文连贯

Sample WritingI(2000)

①At 7:15 a.m. on the morning of Feb.8th,2000,I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road,taking my morning walk as usual.②I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park.③He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing.④The car was so fast that the old man even didnt have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.⑤I thought the driver would have stopped to help,but she didn't.⑥Instead,she just drove off,leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain.⑦Fortunately,I noted down the details:it was a yellow car,the plate number of which was AC864,and the driver was a young lady.⑧After that,I went over to check out the old man.(30分)

Sample Writing II(2001)

①I'm very pleased to tell you the change s of my life since reduction of learning load was brought in.②But before that,I was often exhausted at weekends.③I attended school and had classes the whole day.④In the evening,I was often forced to do my boring homework and I could not go to bed until 11:30.⑤Since the program of reducing learning load was introduced,my life,however,has been much more interesting.⑥I frequently pay a visit to museums,drop in at computer rooms and draw pictures in my leisure(=spare)time.⑦After lunch,I watch TV,read stories and look through newspapers to enrich my horizon.⑧No longer do I stay up;on the contrary,I go to bed at about 10p.m.⑨Inshort,I am quite satisfied with my life now.(25分)

上面两篇文章都有一些共同的特点:内容充实,要点全面;语言丰富,文字优美;行文连贯,思路清晰,过渡自然,均为满分作文。我们认为,考生要想在高考写作中取得理想的分数,必须明确高考写作考查的形式