写作行云流水 连贯方能摘高分(二)

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写作行云流水 连贯方能摘高分(二)

从海外考试领域到英语培训领域,朗阁教育集团一直致力于雅思(IELTS)、新托福(TOEFL iBT)、SAT、口语、企业团训的学术研究,先后出版近百套专业英语书籍。中心还荟集了上百位优秀中外雅思、新托福、口语等语言教育专家。并已经帮助数十万名考生在雅思、新托福、口语领域达到理想高分,成为英语培训领域领军品牌。旗下更有朗阁留学海归专家保驾护航,申请成功率近100%。

上一篇章中,朗阁海外考试研究中心写作组的专家结合多年的考试及教学经验,给雅思考生们讲解了如何增强雅思写作段落内部的连贯性。主要介绍了正确使用指代词和正确使用意思相关联词两种技巧,今天让我们继续跟著名师的脚步,探寻另两种使雅思写作行云流水的方法。

三、正确使用过渡词

使用过渡词可以说是实现段落内部表达连贯的最主要的手段。这是因为过渡词可以表示句与句之间的逻辑关系。下面朗阁海外考试研究中心将列举几类作文中常用的过渡词:

★ 表示并列

First / second / last, also, and, as well as, at the same time, equally important

●剑桥5 test4 task2范文中的句子:

It seems that the experience we have in life are so unpredictable andso powerful, that they can boost or over-ride other influences, andthere seems to be plenty of research findings to confirm this.

★ 表示递进

furthermore, in addition, moreover

剑桥7 test B task2范文中的.句子:

It is true that it is only those who reach the top of their profession who can get these huge salaries. They are, in effect, rare talents.Furthermore, the majority of stars do not hold their top positions long.

★ 表示举例

as, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, that is, to illustrate

剑桥5 test B task2范文中的句子:

The majority of stars do not hold their top positions long. Sport stars and pop stars, for example, are soon replaced by the next younger, more energetic generation, while the good looks of most film stars quickly fade.

★ 表示重复

in other words, that is, to repeat

剑桥7 test1 task2范文中的句子:

Some people believe that innate talent is what differentiates a person who has been trained to play a sport or an instrument, from those who become good players. In other words, there is more to the skill than a learned technique, and this extra talent cannot be taught, no matter how good the teacher or how frequently a child practices.

★ 表示对比

however, in/by contrast, on the other hand, whereas, on the contrary

剑桥5 test2 task2范文中的句子:

The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or travelling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on.

★ 表示因果

as a result, because, consequently, for this reason, since, as, therefore, thus, owing to

剑桥7 test1 task2范文中的句子:

Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills, including those associated with sport, art or music. So from our own school experience, we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice.

★ 表示让步

although, even if, unless

剑桥5 testB task2范文中的句子:

Most of this rubbish comes from the packaging from the things we buy, such as processed food. But even if we buy fresh food without packaging, we still produce rubbish from the plastic bags used everywhere to carry shopping home.

★ 表示态度

strangely enough, undoubtedly, fortunately, unfortunately, most importantly, surprisingly

剑桥6 test4 task2范文中的句子:

However, reaching the conclusion that change is inevitable is not the same as assuming that "change is always for the better".Unfortunately, it is not always the case that new things are promoted because they have good impacts on the majority of people.

★ 表示总结

overall, in conclusion, in summary, to sum up

●剑桥5 test4 task2范文中的句子:

In conclusion, I do not think that either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but that both have powerful effects.

四、正确使用相同的句子结构

相同的句子结构能加深读者对作者观点的印象,提高文章表达的连贯性,更能增强文章的气势和感染力。

剑桥5 test B task2范文中的句子:

We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has used up valuable resources and energy to produce. We also forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to dispose of.

剑桥6 test4 task2范文中的句子:

Sooner or later they will find that the familiar jobs no longer exist, or that the "safe" patterns of behaviour are no longer appropriate.

剑桥7 test1 task2范文中的句子:

Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and without the training, the child wouldnot learn how to exploit and develop their talent.

以上四点是雅思考官范文中所体现出的增强文章段落内部连贯性的方法,在此,朗阁海外考试研究中心希望广大考生能够注意模仿和学习,能够在表达的连贯性方面获得高分。

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