No matter how much fund that our government would put into (the recovery of tainted region), we will never see (a clean sky or breath fresh air) if effort of the young generation were absent. Although not financially independent, our college students must be doing everything we can to fulfill our duty to take part into the improvement of our community.
3、负向文章行文思路结尾：
With efforts from all walks of life, it is certain that the situation would get improved soon.
三、正向文章行文思路 (积极倡导)：
( Confidence ) is partially the driving force behind the evolution/growth of our society. And all hands are supposed to join together to ( foster people’s confidence ).
1、社会层面
(1)媒体传递正能量media
The mass media should exert more positive energy, such as being confidence, to the public so that people would react more positively to difficulties and adversities.
(2)教育education
Education, affects people’s attitude and reaction to the world. Thus, moral education should be enhanced and concentrated on juveniles and kids before they enter their adulthood. Specifically，self-discipline and code of social conduct should be written in books and carefully discussed in class.
(3)学校college
College is where undergraduates obtain knowledge and skills to enhance their academic performance and where students get their personality and code of social conduct improved as well. Thus, moral course of moral education should be provided as elective curriculums to college students.
curriculum 校内课程
extra curriculum课外活动
electives n选修课 elective curriculums
2、个人层面
(1)改善自我
①Reading books. We can devote some of our leisure to cultivating a love of reading books. You will find what you can not get in reality but in books, such as companion, answers to tough questions, etiquette as well as mental power etc.
such as +N/doing
for example,+句子
②Exercising. Polls conducted online says, taking part into sports would improve your mentality, personality and strengthen your weak point. Your will find yourself more assertive and decisive after one year of group exercising.
find oneself +adj
find oneself +doing sth
③+给予他们时间成长Of course, we can not grow to be (a confident person) overnight if we were not, therefore, we should allow ourselves to take baby steps to learn it.
(2)志愿工作voluntary work
It is highly recommended that people should participate in voluntary work. During the process, you would get your mind purified, moral consciousness boosted, and social responsibilities strengthened. You would like to join hands with your peers or colleagues to proceed with your task.
get sth done
正向文章行文思路结尾：
I am determined to say that effort and devotion from all hands would promise a prosperous and harmonious society.
I am sure that effort and devotion from all walks of life would ensure that our society make a rapid strides in near future.