高考满分作文回顾(2)

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高考满分作文回顾(2)

　　积累卡片英汉互译

高考满分作文回顾(2)

　　好词

　　1.promote v .促进 2. interpersonal adj.人际的3. generation gap. 代沟4. open-minded adj. 虚心的

　　好句

　　1. students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

　　同学之间应该互相倾听，这样他们可以互相学习和帮助，也会形成友谊。

　　评析：复杂句的组合，被动句的使用。

　　2. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.

　　我想强调的是我们每个人都应该更多的倾听他人。

　　评析：复合句的使用。

　　【北京卷】

　　【试题回放】

　　假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。

　　注意：词数不少于60.

　　提示词：游乐园 amusement park 垃圾箱 bin

　　Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.

　　The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view . However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.

　　We were tired but happy.

　　【名师点评】

　　本情景作文的内容要点如下：1.讨论;2.爬山;3.检拾别人的垃圾;4.投放垃圾。内容要点可用不同方式表达。本文覆盖了所有内容要点，较好地完成了试题规定的任务。其中，写作主题突出，详略得当，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，而且有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文机构紧凑。本文叙述清楚，描写细致，准确运用了很多富有表现力的词和句型，例如：“set off early”，“enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view”, ”were shocked to see litter here and there “等，将活动的情形很形象地描述了出来。

　　积累卡片英汉互译

　　好词

　　1 set off 出发 2. litter n.废弃物 3.respectively adv.分别地

　　好句

　　1.While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view .

　　在爬山时，我们享受着温暖的阳光和美丽的风景。

　　1. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels.

　　然而，当我们登上山顶，被眼前的一幕惊呆了：瓶子和香蕉皮这样的废弃物到处都是。

　　评析：细节描写，生动形象。“shock”一词也用得生动传神。

　　【湖北卷】

　　【试题回放】

　　假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。

　　要点：1. 问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信;该产品已售完，无法更换;型号新，无配件，无法维修。 2. 要求：公司应尽快予以更换。

　　注意：

　　1. 词数为100左右;

　　2. 参考词汇：配件—— spare part;

　　3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);

　　4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。

　　Dear Sir，

　　I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.

　　Thank you for your consideration.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Bu Manyi

　　【名师点评】

　　本文内容要点齐全，语言丰富，结构合理，如头两句说明了购买手机后发现故障的情况，中间部分说明了无法维修而必须让公司更换手机的原委，最后明确提出自己的要求，明白流畅，将题目所提出的要点全部表达清楚，较好的完成了任务。全文以一般过去时为基调，结合主动语态与被动语态，并使用了so, but, therefore 等连接词，使文章结构完整严密。固定短语，如be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用，使文章的语言显得地道而精炼。

　　积累卡片英汉互译

　　好词

　　1. disappointment n.失望 2.desperate adj.绝望的3. consideration n.体谅

　　好句

　　To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.

　　令我失望的是，他说因为在中国是新款手机，所以没有配件来修理。

　　评析：复杂句的组织; to my disappointment, 常用短语。

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