Mr. White has a small shop in the middle of our town, and he sells pictures in it. They are not expensive ones, but some of them are very beautiful.
Last Saturday, a woman came into the shop and saw a lot of pictures. Then she pointed to one of them and asked, How much is the picture with horses in a field?
Twenty pounds, Madam. Mr. White answered. The woman closed her eyes for a few seconds and said, I can only give you two pounds for it.
Two pounds? Mr. White said angrily. I spent more than two pounds in buying canvas.
Oh, but they were clean, then. said the woman.
Very nice! The first para. makes a good beginning. The last para. makes a perfect ending. All the points have been covered. Its clever of you to use a topic sentence at the beginning of a para. Its wonderful to use proper conjunctions between sentences.
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